My goal is to add show not tell to my writing.
The prompt is :…as the door slammed, I knew…
“Stop it’s mine!” I screamed.
“No it is mine” Shelly screached. We were fighting over the IPad a typical thing that we do every day. We were rolling around on the floor tring to grab it befroe the other did. When suddenly I said,
“You are a pig Shelly a mean nasty pig!” Shelly’s eyes bulded wide and staarted to fill up with water, her red cheeks fading.
She ran away and slammed the door to her room, and as the door slamed, I knew I had said the wrong thing.