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The prompt is: “so, as I looked over the edge I saw…”
I look over the edge and see water. I back away and sit down on a deck chair. My friend Sarah comes over.
“Why don’t you go in?” She asks.
“I don’t like the water.” I say.
“Come on it’s not that bad. She says. “I’ll go with you.” I stand up reluctantly and walk over to the pool. I dip my feet into the cold water and wait. Sarah jumps in and waits for me. I slide in slowly the water rising past my waist then my shoulders. I slip under the water and think to myself, this isn’t so bad.
Prompt: But what colour should it be?
The sun is is yellow the sky is blue,
And as soon as I look at you I knew,
It couldn’t be purple or yellow or green,
Or marigold blossom or cherry supreme,
I close my eyes and think of the trees,
I really don’t know what colour it should be,
I open my eyes and take a look,
At my Dad, Mum and my best friend Brooke,
They all look up at the clear blue sky,
Where I spot an arch forming up high,
It should not be one colour or two or three,
It should be many like a rainbow should be.
The prompt is: …but I didn’t understand the instructions…
I stared confused. I had no idea what I was doing. Professor Lidsey cracked her whip so I started. I shoved pieces on and pulled pieces off prettending to know what I was doing. When I was “finished”, the “catapult” looked like a nightmare.
“What is this?” She asked.
“A catapult miss.”
“How does it work.” she observed the thing from all angles.
“Like this.” I say loading a stick into the basket. I walk halfway around the machine before I find the lever. I pull. Nothing happens.
She raised her whip.
“But I didn’t understand the instructions!”
The prompt is to create a magical animal and write about it.
NEW DISCOVERY FOUND A LIZARD BIRD THAT LIVES IN THE FIRE DESERT
This new creature is an extraordinary species which we are calling the red winged lizard. Scientists say that this animal can absorb hundreds more heat then us humans and can survive in those temperatures for weeks. We believe that our climate is to cool for the animal and it needs to be returned to it’s habitat as soon as possible.
The red winged lizard has:
.Huge red wings up to 3 m long
.Giant claws to catch hey prey in
.A long tongue to absorb lots of water
1. why isn’t the ring of fire a complete circle
2. Why is the ring of fire there?
1.I now understand what the ring of fire is.
The walls were hard in the cell. I couldn’t escape. Killed for accused muder. If they kill me then thats two deaths in one day. I hear footsteps in the hall and lie back down on my bed, trying to look as innocent as possible.
“Hennry White you have been acused of murder and you shall be hanged. We have just recived a new rope.”
“when did it arrive?’ I said.
“None of your beeswacks!” Replied the man in a childish tone.
I was marched up onto the platform, the rope was correctly positioned and then the trapdoor opened.
The prompt is: SHOUTED CRIMSON MISTY FRANTICALLY GRAVE
Susan doged around the graves. Finding the right one was crical but it was hard to tel through the fog. Misty waited by the gates of the cemetery well actualy she was locked out of the cemetery by the gates. She was the lookout but she didn’t understand why she had to be locked out by the big crimson gates. A siren wailed in the distace. Coming closer and closer.
“Susan the police the police are here!” Misty shouted waving her arms frantically although it was hopeless in the fog. Misty dived behind a bush. Misty could hear them open the gates and go inside. Oh no she thought.
My goal is to add more descriptive words.
The prompt is:…Although they ran quickly, they were still not making enough progress…
She could see the fnish line. Slowly getting closer as their team sprinted through the crowded streets. After a day of scavenger hunting they were exgausted but all that was on their minds was the sweet smell of victory at the finish line. Sally had been apointed the captain of the team. She turned around and could see the second place team behind them and although they ran quickly, they were still not making enough progress. Sally sped up and so did the team. It would be close.
The prompt is: 
“Are those real?”
“No there fake. Go and by one.” I slide over to the egg stand and by two eggs. one is painted brigh green and the other is a dark yellow.
“Excuse me.” I say,”Are these chocolate eggs?”
“No silly. They are hard boiled eggs. It is a tradition here to have boiled eggs instead of chocolate ones.” The attendent said.
I walk back over to Max.
“They are real.” I say holding out his bright green egg.
“No they aren’t” he says trying to find the edge of his “rapper.” Suddently he sinks his teeth in to the hard shell.