The promt is:
“Sally!” I cry as I sprint up the stairs to her bedroom. I thump on the door madly until she opens it.
“Sally you’ll never believe what I saw today.” I said sitting down on her over sized bed.
“What was it Max?” she asked.
“Well I was at the park just walking along and I saw this huge teacup! It was just sitting right in the ground!” I exclaimed.
“Was it gold or bronze? It could be a statue.” Sally asked,
“No it was all colourful and bright.”
“I wonder who put it there.” I say.
“Yeah me too.”
the promt is: Ladder Goldfish Flew Brown Slowly
I climbed up the ladder slowly and carefully. It wobbled with every step. As I reach the top I cluch onto the gutter and start shoveling leaves out. I am baking under the midmorning light as I foget I am on a ladder and move. it wobbles so vilenty I am trown off. I fly through the air and land in a puddle of sticky brown mud. Great. I trudge inside to clean myself up and glace over at the fishtank. The goldfish is dead. floating above the water. I sigh. it’s going to be a long day.
The prompt is: We were moving very fast when.
I jumped into the cart and sped down the hill with Roger and Michel close behind. Mimi was shouting but I couldn’t hear a word she said. We we’re moving very fast when we hit a rock. It was so sudden and we didn’t see it coming. We flew through the air and crashed at the bottom of the hill and over the line. We had won but my arm was swollen and hurting heeps. I was screaming and shouting as I tried to move my arm. My mother had told me not to race and now this has happened.
My writing goal is to include more descriptive words- (highlighted in blue)
My prompt is – Red Before Snake Clock Cycled
I had to get there before midnight. I cycled down the enclosed alleyways. The street lamps shed a faint light as my small red bike sped down the silent roads. The familiar sound ran through the town as the clock struck twelve. I sped up, hoping that whatever was coming couldn’t keep up. I was focused on getting away. Suddenly a huge black snake was in front of me. This was what was coming a snake. It opened its mouth. Wider and wider until I was swallowed into the wide jaws of the snake. Plunging to my death inside a snake.
The prompt is: …but where would we hide it all?…
I look up and see blury images on the walls as I speed past. We turn into our room and look at our stash. Two crunchies four mars bars and four lolly snakes. I turn to Jimmy my younger brother and we hi-five before digging in to our candy feast.
“I can’t belive Mum hasn’t caught us!” I say after finshing off my last lolly snake.
We both looked at the pile of rapers infront of us. But where would we hide it all? Sundenly there was a knock on the door.
the prompt is: flame, swimming, celebrated, white, tomorrow
The flame spirted high into the sky. earth around me was white from the days of snow. We had just celebrated christmas and tomorrow we would go back to the plain old days of swimming in pools or playing with friends. Some of my friends are going overseas while I stay here trapped in a country I have grown up in and know everythng about. not going on an adventure not seeing the world. I will be trapped here no matter what happens.
The prompt is:
They were sticking out of the water like there was a body attached but there was none. The legs lay there like part of a prank. We all first noticed them on the same day Friday the 13th. Now Friday the 13th has a special curse on it as three boys went missing that day and three pairs of legs sprouted out of the ground. Still they lay here sprouting up like a candle that’s never been lit. someone said they once saw them move with their very own eyes. I don’t know if it’s true but anything can happen on friday the 13th.
The prompt is:
I was running. The kite was flying behind me. Suddenly I tripped. There was a hole, a huge hole, it was bigger than my foot but it was shaped like a footprint. I looked around. No – one was around this part of the park. I took another look at the footprints. I thought that they had been made from a long time ago because they had moss growing around the edges. I was worried. I grabbed some sand from the nearby sand pit and filled in the hole. I ran away from there as fast as I could never looking back. I never go to that park anymore but i’m not sure why.
The prompt is: … then suddenly it went dark…
The floor was creaking. It was following me! I ran faster. The marble vases and photos fell to the floor with a crash. It was catching up. I turned the corner into the living room and tried to get out the back door. It was locked. It was getting closer. I turned into the laundry and locked the door behind me. I ran into the parlor and locked that door too. I was trapped. The Landry door opened with a snap. He was right outside the parlor. The door crashed open and then suddenly it went dark…